Light dosed Prayer half hearted,
‘ere thine shining presence O Lord!
The body lies before him gaping,
A little of its strength decaying away slowly;
Soft spoken words, hard hitten ones,
All flash by the disturbed mind;
Silent tears of injustice quietly fray upon
The lazy blackened eyes.
Large huge pin pricks all over,
Sky’s constellation etched upon the arm
Washing lead with wine and brandy
Swaying on his spot, next to her
‘The Accident’ not much to talk about!
Ended the race for her, but his?
Not his, he had just a huge wall,
He failed to see it so, climb it so;
He looked felt happier on this side.
Drug high, porn high, craze driven bastard!
He turned to, from redundant anger and pain.
One love, he stuck to, one love HE took away
Slipping poison into his dying death.
He looked at her, kept slapping, pinching
Wake up now, right now, he kept crying.
The girl blinked a little, breathed a little,
But more, there was none.
One slight life now, nothing then,
He dint give up, never did!
“Time’s up”, the doc said, “Shift him!”
And they took him and his sandbag away!
He never responded to any treatment.
Couldn’t! “But he should have”, the doc says
“Its been a year since she died, too long isn’t it??”
Inspirations FROM THE MOVIE KADALIL VIZHUNTHEN I GUESS;-)
ReplyDeleteinspirations from the weather. it was rainy and cloudy and set off my mood. its similar to that movie but was not thinking of it while I wrote this
ReplyDeleteInscriptions.. the words painted a picture of the scene in my mind.. I really loved the usage of words that conveyed a crisp and neat description..one of ur best ones..
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ReplyDeletehas a good flow...:)and very apt usage of words!!!
ReplyDeleteTHank you all ppl!! Thanks
ReplyDeletethis is the first poem of urs i read....too gud man :) :)really awesome...
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